Foregin language instruction should begin in kindergarten,discuss

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Foregin language instruction should begin in kindergarten,discuss

In this age of globalization being multilingual is essential for surviving the global competance. It has gained grounds among the people of world as it fetches many benefits like encourage effective communication,enable to showcase outstanding performance, make them to embrace career opportunities in the long run. studying one's own regional language on the other hand entails few merits like promote respect towards one's own language; thus prevent it from the threat of erosion. However i opine that foreign language education should begin as early as possible.

To begin with the benefits,as we live in a multicultural and multilingual society it is neccessary to know more than one language in order to communicate with the people effectively. for instance today english has become the global language, proficiency in english is synonymous with success, if one has it opportunities are aplenty for them.so it has proved that studying a foreign language especially from very young age has enormous benefits.

secondly, today's children are live in an era of cutthroat competition and rat race. An efficient knowledge of foreign language help them to showcase outstanding performance. If we deny them from pursue the same in the name of patriotism and other reasons it will lead to poor academic performance by the children,finally he will relegated back from the pace of education. thirdly a multilingual person will have better career opportunities in their own country and also at abroad. so in order to embrace those high standards of life it is wise to learn foreign language as early as possible so that children will get high standards of language proficiency.

on the other handsome have the opinion that such habits result in denying their own regional or national language. finally it leads to extinction and erosion of that languages as children do not know any basics of the same. it is like cutting one's own root.for critics, i can say we can include regional languages as a must in the academics but it cannot replace the significance of foreign languages like English as its advantages are enormous for a person.

concisely as we consider the valuable and demanding benefits of a foreign language it is wise to earn proficiency in that as early as possible which will help one to embrace the success in long run.

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Hai Teena...

Good attempt..
You have good points too....):
Keep it up.

Be careful in typing. Space after fullstop and coma....). And capital letter after fullstop..

Best of luck..

Tessy.

Sentence: In this age of globalization being multilingual is essential for surviving the global competance.
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Sentence: To begin with the benefits,as we live in a multicultural and multilingual society it is neccessary to know more than one language in order to communicate with the people effectively. for instance today english has become the global language, proficiency in english is synonymous with success, if one has it opportunities are aplenty for them.so it has proved that studying a foreign language especially from very young age has enormous benefits.
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