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Forests are the lungs of the earth. Destruction of the world's forests amounts to death of the world we currently know.To what extent do you agree or disagree.


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By homanhtai - Posted on 03 June 2013

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Forests are the lungs of the earth. Destruction of the world's forests amounts to death of the world we currently know. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Forests are not only the most important resources of human, but also the habitat of huge amount of plant and animal species on the earth. I totally agree that destroying these natural green resources will lead to dire consequences that people not be able to foreseen such as the climate change, natural disasters, or even extinction of human and most of the creatures on the earth.

Forests have many functions which are vital for human and animal species. Forests absorb carbon dioxide and produce oxygen via the photosynthesis of trees. Human and animal species can not live without oxygen. Our lungs absorb oxygen and generate carbon dioxide and forests work as natural air conditioners ...

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