The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors agriculture, manufacturing, and business and financial services to the UK economy in the twentieth century.

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The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors agriculture, manufacturing, and business and financial services to the UK economy in the twentieth century.

The graph provides information about participate of selected sectors to the UK economy in the twentieth century between 1900- 2000.

As it can be seen agricultural sector was the greatest percentage about 50% and 35% in 1900-1950 respectively. But, manufacturing sector was slightly fewer during 1900-1950, approximately 45% to 40%respectively. By contrast, the percentage of business and financial sectors between 1900-1950 were far considerably fewer.

After 25 years the pattern of the three sectors were reversed. In 1975to 2000the percentage of agriculture and manufacturing sectors were significantly droop, the percentage of former was 10%in 1975while, after 25 years it is droop to 2%. And the latter from 35% in 1975 fall to under 20%.

In 2000, in comparison with agriculture and manufacturing sectors the pattern of business and financial sectors were reverse . and showed significantly increased by nearly 25% in 1975 to 35% in 2000.

In general, agricultural and manufacturing sectors were more popular among other sectors in first 50 years while, in second 50 year business and financial sector were much more popular.

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