The graph shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
The graph provides information about how the quantities of transported goods are changed by four different modes of transport in United Kingdom between 1974 and 2002. In general, it is clear from the data given that three methods of transporting has upward trends, including road, water and pipeline while the one which was rail way, remained stable between 1974 and 2002.
The quantities of goods which are transported by road had highest level during this 28 years period. In contrast, the quantities of goods transported by pipeline had lowest level during the same period. The quantities of tr...
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