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The graphs below show the type of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age

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Given are figures providing a comparison of the proportion of music albums sales in Great Britain in different genre according to age and sex. It is evident from the information that the similar figures of pop and rock music are marked different as against to classical music.

As for all 3 different kinds, males are ahead of their female counterparts, for example, in pop music, it is just over 20% for the former compared to virtually 14% for the latter. The figures of different age groups in pop and rock music see a similar pattern. In these categories, the age group ranging from 25 to 34 ra...

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