A healthy person is often described as someone who has good diet, get plenty of exercise and avoid stress. What should people do stay healthy in your country.
It’s a nice quote “Health is wealth”. Often we see people neglecting their health and running behind the materialistic needs for lavish and relaxed life while, compromising on diet, physic, and most importantly socializing. This essay will discuss about the ways in which people in my country balances their life to be healthy, with tremendous competition and challenges to survive in the fast paced globalization.
Despite the fact that, the three main criteria for being healthy are undoubtedly good diet, regular exercise, and stress management, still many people in my country oversight ...
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Sentence: Therefore, majority of people have realized the significance of the above criteria and have seriously initiated for this activities.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and activities
Sentence: Because in my terms health does not only states to be physically healthy by diet and workout, one should also be able to balance life, which is full of surprises, good or bad.
Description: The word states is not usually used as a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to states
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