Higher education can be funed by severals way such as the following 1. All cost paid by the goverment 2. All costs paid by students 3. All cost paid by the goverment loan which students have to pay back after graduation.please discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of all those theories above decide which the best is.
In recents times,education is very important in society live.There are statement that to catch higher education need all cost paid by goverment and all cost paid by student.This essay explain the advantages and disadvantages of both statement.
Some people have opinion that education have responsible from goverment.For example All cost paid by goverment to get higher education.Firstly,advantages from First statement.If The Goverment paid all education in a country could appear positive effect.Poor Society feel helped goverment.For example in indonesia.Indonesia has progam to help people who cannot take education.The name progam is “BOS(Bantuan operasional sekolah)”.Probably,the student cannot serious when the goverment paid their education.the student control student who get BOS.Because student could BOS between elementary school until senior high school.
Severals opinion that all cost have to paid by student.a lot of positive and negative effects if all cost have to paid by student .student who paid cost in education more seriously Because student think could waste a money,if student just playing around in school or education.Then student could help goverment to improve goverment infrasrtucture,so goverment could give more facility that be able to help student.Disadvantage if srudent paid all cost in education.The goverment have to think if there are system to paod all cost by student.The poor people feel so hard when they want take education because poor people should cost paid the education by theirself.
In conclusion,Goverment should search the best way to society if they want take education,and Goverment have to think about positive and negative effect.
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Sentence: This essay explain the advantages and disadvantages of both statement.
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Sentence: Some people have opinion that education have responsible from goverment.
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Sentence: There are statement that to catch higher education need all cost paid by goverment and all cost paid by student.
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Sentence: Some people have opinion that education have responsible from goverment.
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Sentence: Probably, the student cannot serious when the goverment paid their education.
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