IELTS essay:Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad/working abroad for a period of time.
With the rapid development of society, we have entered an era of information explosion. In order to acquire more knowledge, more and more people decide to further their study abroad. Studying abroad brings about many advantages. It widens students' knowledge and horizons, and meanwhile cultivates their independence and personalities.
Firstly, students can learn advanced knowledge and experience abroad. Since the reform and the policy of opening to the outside world, China has strengthened cooperation with many countries. As a result, the scientific and technological level has been improved ...
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Sentence: In order to acquire more knowledge, more and more people decide to further their study abroad.
Description: The word further is not usually used as a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to further
flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.042 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.979 7.5
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 313 350
No. of Characters: 1679 1500
No. of Different Words: 163 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.206 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.364 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.993 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 127 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 102 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 79 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 48 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.042 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.979 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.458 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.298 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.523 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.074 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5