Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
What other measures do you think might be effective?
Nowadays,there have been a doubt that what measures have to be taken to solve growing traffic and pollution problems . Is it have to be petrol?
Firstly , the population of our world is increasing . That implies growing traffic from which people suffer. The solution as to increase the cost of petrol , in my opinion, is not the best. It could make a huge gap between who has enough money and who has not.On the contrary , if we build special road for driving on bicyles , it will be better, it is not only decrease the growing traffic , it is helpfull for our health.Also we can add to this like using public transport or walking, instead of using car.
Scientists from whole world already working at making good transport which use elictricity without damaging environment. What is more, with devoloping technology , we have opportunity to take energy from sun light. Naturally, all this equipments will not produse any rubbish but the dark side is that it is not available for many people.
At this sutuation goverment have to help to produce sources which has no effect on the environment by investing more money. Even if we rise up the price of oil , it will also rise up other things which require oil. This impact can be dangerous for poor people. If they are now in difficult situation, after rising up the cost of petrol , it will be very hard to imagine .
In conclusion , we have been convinced that people can make better decisions on solving growing traffic and pollution problems , such as using modern technologies and by developing this technologies.
it is not only decrease the growing traffic
it not only decreases the growing traffic
Scientists from whole world already working at making
Scientists from whole world already are working at making
Sentence: Naturally, all this equipments will not produse any rubbish but the dark side is that it is not available for many people.
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goverment have to help to produce sources which has no effect
governments have to help to produce sources which have no effect
Sentence: On the contrary , if we build special road for driving on bicyles , it will be better, it is not only decrease the growing traffic , it is helpfull for our health.Also we can add to this like using public transport or walking, instead of using car.
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Sentence: Scientists from whole world already working at making good transport which use elictricity without damaging environment.
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Sentence: What is more, with devoloping technology , we have opportunity to take energy from sun light.
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Sentence: Naturally, all this equipments will not produse any rubbish but the dark side is that it is not available for many people.
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Sentence: At this sutuation goverment have to help to produce sources which has no effect on the environment by investing more money.
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