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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution. To what extend do you agree or disagree?What other measure do you think might be effective?


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By sandeep pooni - Posted on 17 June 2012

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
What other measure do you think might be effective?

Nowadays modern life is very complicated, busy and fast. Everybody does not have time. The roads are more crowdie than past which increases the degree of pollution. Some people think by increasing the price of petrol, the both problem will be solved at once. I do not believe it is the best way to tackle with growing traffic and pollution problems.

The hike in petrol prices will create other problem like inflation as India has facing this situation. Some people believe that traffic problem will not be solved with this method as in today’s life people have to go to job ,for survive, so number of vehicle on road will not be come down. On contrary, it will raise the depression in people as the living cost is rising day by day. Moreover, car and motor-cycle industries have worse impact of this step which is not good thing for any economy.

To handle this problem, people should use public transport more as compare to personal vehicles. And also car pulling technique should be used more. The governments and people should also reduce their unnecessary visit of national and international by planes. The online technique such as shopping, paying bills and video conferencing should be promoted in people because it decreases the traveling. The governments should encourage the research of finding alternative of petrol which creates less pollution than petrol.

To sum up, growing petrol prices is the worse method to step-down the traffic and pollution. Alone governments can not tackle these obstacles. It can be solved with the join efforts of people and governments.

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Sentence: To handle this problem, people should use public transport more as compare to personal vehicles.
Description: A conjunction, subordinating is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to as and compare

Sentence: The roads are more crowdie than past which increases the degree of pollution.
Error: crowdie Suggestion: crowded

flaws:
No. of Words: 264 350
No. of Characters: 1286 1500
No. of Different Words: 148 200
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.529 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.705 7.5

Need more vocabulary words and more compound sentences.

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 264 350
No. of Characters: 1286 1500
No. of Different Words: 148 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.031 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.871 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.489 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 102 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 61 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 39 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 29 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.529 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.705 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.353 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.298 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.506 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.05 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5

sandeep pooni's picture

I am very thankful of you for this.

Could you suggest me vocabulary for this essay?

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You are welcome!

The flaws : No. of Words: 264 350 means you'd better put more vocabulary words.

No. of Different Words: 148 200 means you need to have more different words.

Vocabulary words are related to the language. It takes time to improve. and we don't think there are some words defined for a specific topic. So what you can do is: read more sample essays and try to write more essays by your own.

sandeep pooni's picture

Thanks,Your feedback is precious.

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what would be the correct sentence of " To handle this problem, people should use public transport more as compare to personal vehicles." this sentence.

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