The internet is probably the most significant invention of the last 30 years. Without it, our lives would be completely different.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The invention of internet has brought significant changes to inhabitant lives. This condition is completely changed from last 30 years. Recently, most of important invention is establish, so it can help inhabitants to utilize the feature invention. However, important invention has drawback, for example it can increase high crime in their lives. This essay will examine those aspects.
At the moment, internet is the best one invention and also internet has lots of benefit to inhabitants. For example, professional worker and students are extremely helpful to their task, duties and document because internet can give instant information almost every subject. Also internet can make inhabitants more easily to buy online food via online internet. They can buy some stuff, clothes, gadget and also electronic just by internet which connect to their phone cell.
Internet has some features which extremely helpful out lives such as email, instant message and social media. It makes inhabitants easier to keep in touch with their family member, relative business and friend. Also inhabitants can get new friend from abroad, they can learn other language.
On the other hand, internet has negative effect to inhabitants. There are lots of website contain offensive content, commonly website contain offensive to appoint government about against policies. Sometimes internet has violent and sexual content. It is extremely harmful to next generation, because our next generation can ruin their norm and behaviour. Also, Cybercrime will increase in the internet, so inhabitants who use internet must pay attention about this crime.
To sum up, our lives have different since invention of internet and internet lots of benefit to our lives, but we must consider about negative effect of invention internet.
Sentence: Recently, most of important invention is establish, so it can help inhabitants to utilize the feature invention.
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Sentence: To sum up, our lives have different since invention of internet and internet lots of benefit to our lives, but we must consider about negative effect of invention internet.
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Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace different with Noun.
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