Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
It is seen now-a-days that money forms an integral part of life. There is always a dilemma in the mind on whether to save money or spend it to achieve a luxurious living. In my opinion, it is always better to do the former and spend it as and when necessary.
Firstly, investing money in policies, fixed deposits etc. may prove to be a secure bet.
It will not only help in increasing the money by adding interests to it but also safeguard the future as well. Monetary help could be provided to family anytime.
Secondly, saving money has many other benefits also. In my view, buying homes and luxuries like cars, expensive televisions cannot be achieved until the money is constantly saved.
However, some people tend to believe that best utilization of money is achievable only when it is spent to enjoy life.I saw a movie in which a man thinks of saving money till forty years and then live a king's life but he is unsure whether he will survive till that age or not.
Taking everything into consideration, although a person might not be sure the number of years he will live, but saving money may always prove to be a better bet as it not only keeps on adding to it through interests but also secures the future as well.
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Hi, Thanks a lot for checking
Hi,
Thanks a lot for checking my essay.
Please suggest the areas in which I need improvements. I am aware that I should use complex vocabulary.
I am preparing for IELTS.
You don't need to use complex
You don't need to use complex vocabulary words, you need to put more vocabulary words in essay body area.
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Sentence: It is seen now-a-days that money forms an integral part of life.
Error: now-a-days Suggestion: nowadays
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Need more vocabulary words.
And when you support 'better to save money', you always support, don't change your idea in the fourth paragraph.
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