It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be.Give reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together?

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It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be.

Give reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together?

Today’s busiest life is taking away people to each other. In past family relations were so strong, people always tried to get inform about other families that were close to them. Time has changed and families are not as close as they were in past. Some reasons which took families away from other families are to be discussed to know the root cause of this situation and how we can bring families closer by resolving these problems.

Social media and electronic media have bound people to its magical nets of entertainment and every single family has their pass time activities on electronic or social media. People spend lots of their time in watching TV shows or on social media, this changed way of living has taken away people to their families and people don’t have much time to go and meet their relatives and families. Another reason which is very significant is that people don’t have much time because of their jobs & business responsibilities. For explanation of above reason I would like to share my personal Experience about disturbance in family relations due to social media. One of my close friend who was very social before joining of social media, but when he got involve in these activities like social media, he left all his friends and even relatives. He was thinking that he has so many friends on social media and does not need to go anywhere to see them. Soon he realized that he was wrong and social connections are not real relations and it is just a waste of time nothing else.

To bring families closer to each other we ought to create environment where people meet other families to make relationships stronger. We have to provide awareness about importance of strong relations between families. I would strongly suggest that it should be realized to user of social media that real relations are only those which you make by meetings with people rather than social connections. We can use electronic and social media to get realize people about significance of family relations and relations with other families.

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Number of Paragraphs: 3 5

better to have 5 paragraphs:

para 1: introduction.
para 2: reason 1
para 3: reason 2
para 4: reason 3 (optional)
para 5: conclusion

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