It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person.
Those who advocate that some people are born with certain talents believed that talents are given and genetically inheritance and embodied to people who got such talents. People believed that talents are such kind of gift because we often find that there are some people who showed their spectacular or extraordinary talents basically never got any exercises or knowledge about it particularly both they did it very well. That is why nowadays many talent hunter looking for the talent people for commercial purpose, because talented people have their own talents and with a little touch, they’ll be...
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Sentence: They believed as long as someone practice well, especially when they starts practice since they are kids, the better results they will get.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to they and starts
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No. of Different Words: 146 200
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5
The essay needs to be better organized:
para 1: introduction. my opinion: A or B. agree or disagree
para 2: reason 1
para 3: reason 2
para 4: reason 3 (optional)
para 5: conclusion
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors:0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 335 350
No. of Characters: 1501 1500
No. of Different Words: 146 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.278 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.481 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.238 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 101 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 59 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 31 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 30.455 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 14.786 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.818 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.448 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.599 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.218 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5