It is obvious that there are lots of book which are written by persons who had lots of experience about some special subjects and when we want to gather information about some things that are new and strange for us, we can use these book easily and can gain a lot of information about what we want because these days there are different kinds of books that can help us in different kinds of subjects. In contrast, in some special cases we can not find some special knowledge about some things and these books can not support us well since our minds are so creativity and lots of questions are crossing our minds that we can not find their answers and we have to look for these answers by our experiences.
It is clear that contains of books are as a result of people experiences and they broadcast their experiences by writing the books in different kinds of form like novel or science books. When some people study these books and encourage their friends and families to study them not only they can be able to aware from the new knowledge that are written in these books but they also can use the valuable experiences about special subjects by this way which would not be happen if the people who write these books did not want to publish their experiences.
On the other hand, we can not overlook that some things that come to our minds is new idea and we can not find them in any book which is lead to investigating them by gaining from experience which would never happen if we did not study the other book that are written by experts. It is clear that studying the other books help us to think better and develop our ideas and after that we try to consider. In fact, although not every thing that is learned is contained in books, when we study many books about special subject we can develop our idea twice as creative as when we do not study any book.
In conclusion, I think that both of knowledge gained from experience and knowledge gained from books are so important and although there are some things that we can not find in the contain of book, they are so useful since help us to gain information about how to use some methods that lead to gaining knowledge.
Sentence: In conclusion, I think that both of knowledge gained from experience and knowledge gained from books are so important and although there are some things that we can not find in the contain of book, they are so useful since help us to gain information about how to use some methods that lead to gaining knowledge.
Description: A conjunction, subordinating is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to since and help
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