Keeping animals in captivity is cruel. There is no reason for zoos to exist in the 21st century? How far do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays, zoos become controversial news and prevail in the world. Some people argue that in era modern animals should live in a nature area which is the best place of animals to be adaptable life. However, I think that with captivity would treat the animals to be better than living in jungles.
Nationalities opinion that wild animals are like a prison for animals habitation because it could delay the beasts reproduction process. Human brains imagine that the forests are good locations for inhabitants of cells in the wild animals. The animals would be nature to generate their generations. Th...
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