The line graph below gives information on cinema attendance in the UK.
the presented graph illustrates the changes in cinema attendance during two decades. from the overall graph it can be seen that mentioned indicators show the similiar patterns by increasing slightly.
the percentage of cinema attendances, in 14-24 age ,rise gradually from 15% in 1990 to 18% in 1995 before decreasing sharply, hitting the lowest point at roughly 12%, only increase again in following years with about 21%. aged of 24-34 also display the same tendency with former one in higher rates, whose indicator observed a stability during last five years.
turning to 34-54 age groups, it is noticable that these trends display a gradual incrise (44% and 51%) at given period of time, accompained by sharpe drops with 33% and 38% respectively. interestingly enough, the higest indicator belong to 44-54 aged people amoung all groups.
to conclude, in UK, all people of given age groups ahowed a growth figure in cinema attendance from 1990 to 2010.
the higest indicator belong to 44-54 aged people
the highest indicator belongs to 44-54 aged people
Sentence: the presented graph illustrates the changes in cinema attendance during two decades. from the overall graph it can be seen that mentioned indicators show the similiar patterns by increasing slightly.
Error: similiar Suggestion: similar
Sentence: turning to 34-54 age groups, it is noticable that these trends display a gradual incrise 44 and 51 at given period of time, accompained by sharpe drops with 33 and 38 respectively. interestingly enough, the higest indicator belong to 44-54 aged people amoung all groups.
Error: sharpe Suggestion: share
Error: noticable Suggestion: noticeable
Error: amoung Suggestion: among
Error: accompained Suggestion: accompanied
Error: incrise Suggestion: increase
Error: higest Suggestion: highest
Sentence: to conclude, in UK, all people of given age groups ahowed a growth figure in cinema attendance from 1990 to 2010.
Error: ahowed Suggestion: showed
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