Loosing important natural resours
As we know,world population is totally rising every year,every day even every minut.Their requirements are also increising too.As a matter of fact,we need more food,more fresh water and more place to live. As a result of this many parts of the world are loosing essential and sometimes irreplaceable resourse.Such as forests,wild animals or fresh water.In this essay I will focus on the threat of disapering many animals.
The reasons why I think the animals should be preserved is that all living creatures.On this planet are connected with each other. Certanly,it is chain of the life. However,the disaperance of only one spices can cause dramatic changes in the planet and even dealth of many other living creatures. For instant,the disperance of buts will be cause the huge increasing of insect population and this will reflect on all animals and planets. Another example is that the population of insect will decrease significanly,and this will cause the disaperance of many plants,because,insects are the main pollinators. Or other example disapering of frogs. Naturally,frogs clean the air and sustaine fresh water.Nowadays,technology is developing intensevelly. A different kind of factory is working. Rightly,it is good resolution.However, on the other hand,air also is damaging.Because from these industry,actually factories expant planty of bad and dengerous gas to atmosphere.By this way,this damaging of air it will be cause increaselly death of humanty. Another importand reason is that why we should prevent natural resours?I think it is shamefull for humanity to explain to our children that we are the reason why those animals disapered.on the other hand we bring to a big chasm to us.
In conclusion, I would like to say that, the issui about loosing important natural resorses are topical and open for debete nowadays.I belive that together people can make difference,can attain good resolution for it. From my poin view,the first problem we should find a solution for is human's overpopulation.As I mentioned above people 's demandes are groving and this means we consume more and more natural resorses.
would you agree with me?
Sentence: As we know,world population is totally rising every year,every day even every minut.Their requirements are also increising too.As a matter of fact,we need more food,more fresh water and more place to live.
Error: increising Suggestion: increasing
Sentence: As a result of this many parts of the world are loosing essential and sometimes irreplaceable resourse.Such as forests,wild animals or fresh water.In this essay I will focus on the threat of disapering many animals.
Error: disapering Suggestion: disappearing
Error: resourse Suggestion: resource
Sentence: However,the disaperance of only one spices can cause dramatic changes in the planet and even dealth of many other living creatures.
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Error: disaperance Suggestion: disappearance
Sentence: For instant,the disperance of buts will be cause the huge increasing of insect population and this will reflect on all animals and planets.
Error: disperance Suggestion: No alternate word
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Sentence: Another example is that the population of insect will decrease
significanly,and this will cause the disaperance of many plants,because,insects are the main pollinators.
Error: disaperance Suggestion: disappearance
Error: significanly Suggestion: significantly
Sentence: Or other example disapering of frogs.
Error: disapering Suggestion: disappearing
Sentence: Naturally,frogs clean the air and sustaine fresh water.Nowadays,technology is developing intensevelly.
Error: intensevelly Suggestion: intensively
Error: sustaine Suggestion: sustain
Sentence: Rightly,it is good resolution.However, on the other hand,air also is damaging.Because from these industry,actually factories expant planty of bad and dengerous gas to atmosphere.By this way,this damaging of air it will be cause increaselly death of humanty.
Error: humanty Suggestion: humanity
Error: expant Suggestion: expand
Error: dengerous Suggestion: dangerous
Error: increaselly Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: planty Suggestion: plenty
Sentence: Another importand reason is that why we should prevent natural resours?I think it is shamefull for humanity to explain to our children that we are the reason why those animals disapered.on the other hand we bring to a big chasm to us.
Error: resours Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: importand Suggestion: important
Error: shamefull Suggestion: shameful
Sentence: In conclusion, I would like to say that, the issui about loosing important natural resorses are topical and open for debete nowadays.I belive that together people can make difference,can attain good resolution for it.
Error: resorses Suggestion: reserves
Error: issui Suggestion: issue
Error: belive Suggestion: believe
Error: debete Suggestion: debate
Sentence: From my poin view,the first problem we should find a solution for is human's overpopulation.As I mentioned above people 's demandes are groving and this means we consume more and more natural resorses. would you agree with me?
Error: resorses Suggestion: reserves
Error: groving Suggestion: growing
Error: poin Suggestion: point
Error: overpopulation Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: demandes Suggestion: demands
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