in many cities people these days prefer to live either alone or in small families,rather than in large family unit . is it a positive or negative trend? give your views.
With the advancement of science and technology the lifestyle of human beings has changed at a fiercest.It is contemplated that people in this technical know how society prefer to live in small families cadre rather than in large kin groups.I ponder that it is a positive trend .Below i will accord the reasons with this statement.
To commence with ,there are many perks of nuclear family.Firslty,is prefers to live in small family the economic prestige of the family can be increased because of lesser number of members .As it is said that a penny saved is a penny earned,the bread winner of the family can save the money .Also, with this the hygienic environment of the house can be inculcate.
Ulterior,the conflicts among the member of large family can be palliated .Different people have different vies,habits,interests etc.,which may lead to the misunderstandings or conflicts in the family.Thus,whole the environment will obliterate .To explain it further,suppose to watch a TV program different member have different liking .Thus,with this incidents the conflicts may be increase.
In a nutshell,in my personal pragmatic cognizance to lead a successful life one should live in nuclear kin because of the benefits ellustrated above.Because it is said that you only live once,but if you do it right ,once is enough.Apart from this discipline in the smaller family will be more as compare to the large families.
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Sentence: In a nutshell, in my personal pragmatic cognizance to lead a successful life one should live in nuclear kin because of the benefits ellustrated above.
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