In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solution can you suggest?

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In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solution can you suggest?

It is undeniable that students have bad behavior when they study in their class. For example, they cheat in examination as well as they are absent without any reasons. There are several causes of these problems, yet answers could surely be taken to overcome them.=9

Firstly, students often show their bad behavior because their teacher does not monitor them well. For instance, during examination, teacher just sits in front of the class or stands near door so that the students easily open book or ask their friends for filling answer sheet. This problem will not happen if teacher monitor the students actively. For example, teacher walk around the learners in examination and teacher warn them to do their assignment quietly.

Secondly, unwanted behavior in students is caused by flexibility of their teacher. Students who cheated in the past examination were not be punished. There is no different respond from teacher to both honest students and cheating students. To be good, teacher should stick with the rules regarding cheating such as giving punishment to cheating students. Teacher may ask cheating students to make large paper or stand in front of the class with one foot. If teacher is gentle to their students, it is impossible for students cheat in the examination session. Then, students will give up and never do the same mistake.

In conclusion, there are many kind of reasons for student’s bad behavior which make teacher angry in the study time. However, there are measures which can be practiced by the teacher to tackle this problem.

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