Many newspapers and magazines feature stories about the private lives of famous people. We know what they eat, where they buy their clothes and who they love. We also often see pictures of them in private situations.
Is it appropriate for a magazine or newspaper to give this kind of private information about people?
Give reasons for your answer.
From the last few century, the newspapers were quiet popular between the peoples. They read newspaper to find out about current affairs of the world for instance, stocks, weather, politics and also domestics affairs, whereas they read magazines to be entertained. Therefore, one would enjoy the article that features about the private’s lives of celebrities in magazines rather than newspaper. However, nowadays many newspapers include those stories which are irrelevant.
From my point of view, regarding newspapers, the topic of gossip about famous people’s private lives should not be in it ...
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Sentence: Initially, for example the salman khan is dating with his ex-girl friend or he is not going marry her is not important news.
Description: A verb, present participle or gerund is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to going and marry
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