Many people believe that the increasing of the modern technology at work and in leisure is reducing people's creativity. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Many people believe that the increasing of the modern technology at work and in leisure is reducing people's creativity. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In the millennium era, modern technology builds on rapidly and influence creativity in the society. Thus many benefits arise linearly with people creativity. First, modern technology facilitate people deliver their idea. Second, increment is aesthetic aspect of the creation itself. And the third, reduplicate creation can be easier in other hand quality of creation defensible.

Let us begin. Modern technology facilitate people deliver their idea. People can take out of their inspiration easily. Technology make idea becoming script or drawing serve instantly, quickly and availably to access. It is effortless comparably if we used traditional technology.

Second, increment is aesthetic aspect. Every creation has an aesthetic aspect which can break while we make it in traditional ways. Risk of creation breakage because of Human error can be reducible. Script, picture, graph easily edited and produced mass while we used modern one.

For the last the outcome of the creation in quantity can be copied easily, hence it follows with same quality. It is supported for make simple extension to industrial producing. Industrial, begin home industry until factory now already use modern technology in their creativity.

Summarizing from three points forward, I disagree if we said modern technology reducing creativity. It can be supported with all of benefit inside. Developments of modern technology as my vision linearly with human creativity while the people wisely to use it.

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Modern technology facilitate people deliver their idea.
Description: two verbs in one sentence.

Sentence: And the third, reduplicate creation can be easier in other hand quality of creation defensible.
Error: reduplicate Suggestion: replicate

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Don't need to list reasons in the introduction paragraph. This will create some duplicate words and sentences.

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