Many people use distance-learning programmes (study material post, TV, internet…) to study at home. But some people think that it cannot bring benefit as much as attending college or university. Do you agree or disagree?
Human can learn everything. There are no limitations of area that make people difficult to learn. Learning is all about something that make them fascinating includes distance-learning programmes. Nowadays, to learn by distance-learning programmes becomes populer but some people doubt on it. They think it cannot bring benefit as much as attending college or university. In my view, developing of technology refuse the obstacles and no metter where people are.
Internet generates simple communication between two people or more. Internet created that aims to service citizens all over the world. The developing of internet time by time is out of expectation for common people. By internet people can communicate even they are stay so far each other. There are some sofware that usefull for this such as skype, facebook, twitter. By this tool people able to make communication two ways. They only need leptop with internet connection and directly they can study wherever people stay and no matter what time people have chance.
Besides that, distance-learning programmes give students flexibility time and place especially for employers. Some of company requare their staff in spesific level of education but company want the employers still working. The employers too, for some reason did not want to leave their job because of financial problem. For them who have chance there is no option besides distance learning programmes. Distance learning programmes usually provide by famous university. And for several years recently distance learning programmes become trand.
To sum up, I think distance learning proggrammes are necessary in this era. Many students especially for employers are do not have enough time and money can chooce this way and take many advantages.
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