Many shops work for 24 hours a day 7 days a week some people see it as a good idea while others don t Compare different views of customers shop workers and the whole society of this subject and give your opinion about it

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Many shops work for 24 hours a day 7 days a week ; some people see it as a good idea, while others don't. Compare different views of customers, shop workers and the whole society of this subject and give your opinion about it.

In these days, several shops work for 24 hours a day 7 days a week. Since some people buy their needs in late times. Some people think it is necessary and some don’t. Personally, I believe these stores aren't that important unless they are for extreme emergency, I’m going to explain customers, store’s staff and society views.

First of all, Many customers prefer to buy their stuff from 24/7 stores because they believe that these stores have more benefits than time scheduled stores, one of these reasons, these shops give them enough time to shop without being rushed because of closing time. Moreover, people can go to these shops at anytime whenever they need to.

Secondly, The store workers may have advantages and disadvantages of working there, one of these advantages, they would earn higher salaries for working for longer hours in the day, as for the disadvantages working in these shops may exhaust them for working all the night and they have to sleep in their work places, solution for this situation is that they must make scheduled turns for the staff by switching their turns from day to night, so they will have enough time to sleep in their houses.

As for the society, they don’t really care about 24/7 stores unless they are for extreme emergency for some reasons, like pharmacies , keeping them open for 24/7 would really help if someone got injured in midnight or someone needed to buy medicine in late time.

My conclusion is that if any businessman decided to open one of these 24/7 stores, they should have scheduled turns for the store staff and these shops would be really helpful if they were for major situations.

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