The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given is map describing two proposed locations for the construction of a new supermarket in the town called Garlsdon, which has population of 65000.

First glance at the map indicates that, the first probable site is located on the countryside, just between the main road and railway. It is also visible that, this location is situated 15km from the town of Hindon with 65000 inhabitants. The main advantages of it are its vicinity to ways and its provision of access to the dwellers of Hindon in addition to the inhabitants of Garlsdon living at houses.

When it comes to the second potenti...

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town of Hindon with 65000 inhabitants.
town of Hindon with 10,000 inhabitants.

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