As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well being.
What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectoration of job satisfaction for all workers?
These days, many people especially adults spend most of their time at work and it is undeniable that they expect their jobs provide for them a golden opportunity to enjoy their time when they work in their company. Job satisfaction is one of the main important elements of individual well being for them that can not be overlooked easily.
There are several main factors contribute to job satisfaction. At first, the people need to feel their job is important and their work is valuable therefore their superior reactions has important impact on their satisfaction. If their superior give positive ...
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Sentence: If their superior give positive feedback to them, they feel sense of fulfillment which is some thing lead to increasing job satisfaction.
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Sentence: More over, the other factor is sense of belonging to their company because this feeling make sure them, they have job security which means is they will not worry about their job in the future and their company support their job until retirement and they can be able to help their colleagues whenever they run into problems.
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Sentence: In contrast, it is clear that the expectoration of job satisfaction for all workers is unrealistic because some economic problems that are happening around the world cause to some people can not get good job and even in some cases they not only do not have satisfaction job but they also they do not like their job at all because their job is boring and do not relate to their majors that they studied in university.
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