Nowadays, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world is on rise. What are the reasons? Give some solutions.
There has been a sharp rise in crimes in major cities worldwide, and this problem has been of great concern to all. I will discuss how this problem has emerged and what we can do to tackle this problem.
The first reason why there was a rise in juvenile delinquency is the negative influence of commercialized mass media.Put it in detail, lots of publishers of book or program producers are more concerned with profits than the quality, thus books or movies may contain questionable materials, Take violent movies as examples, once children are excessively exposed to them without adults telling th...
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Sentence: To summarise, the media and peer pressure are to blame for the growing number of young offenders and this situation can be remedied if we focus on educating youths.
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