Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?
In the swift development of modern world today, there has been a growing concern about technology, especially how technology influence the relationship of the people. Many aspect of relationship that has been changed because of technology.
A lot of people believe that technology has a huge influence to the relationship of people. Technology can make comunication between two people easier and faster. In past, many people found difficulties to interact with others. They had problem with distance and time. For example, there are two people who lived in different island in indonesia, java island and kalimantan island. To interact each other, they used to send mail, which is took much time. But now, with the influence of technology, that case become easier. People now usually use electronic mail for keep in touch with other people in many areas. It just need several minutes to send and another minutes to receive. People become easier and faster because of technology.
Technology gives a positive development in realtionship. It can make other people keep in touch. It makes more efficient, because it just takes less time. It also make communication cheaper. For example, the cost of delivering mail and electronic mail are different. It takes much time to deliver mail, while just few time to deliver email. The longer distance, the higher price that should pay.
Overall, tehcnology can influence the realtionship of people in a good ways. People are really helped with technology.
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Sentence: But now, with the influence of technology, that case become easier.
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Sentence: People now usually use electronic mail for keep in touch with other people in many areas.
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Sentence: Technology can make comunication between two people easier and faster.
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Sentence: Technology gives a positive development in realtionship.
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Sentence: Overall, tehcnology can influence the realtionship of people in a good ways.
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