Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?
Has this become a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, the way that people communicate with each other has significant changes.
Firstly, it is thanks to the development of technology that the geographical distance is removed so people can communicate and make relationships with a lot of people who live in any where over the world. For example, a Vietnamese person can interact and share pictures and videos, even making friend with an American person who lives far from her or him about thousands mile by using some useful tools or social net workings such as Yahoo mail or Facebook which are provided by the Internet freely. In addition, ...
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Sentence: Firstly, it is thanks to the development of technology that the geographical distance is removed so people can communicate and make relationships with a lot of people who live in any where over the world.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to is and thanks
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Some sentences are too long.
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