Nowadays,there is no need for museums and art galleries any more.Since everything is accessible through internet.People can find any historic fact there.Do you agree or disagree.Give reasons and examples of yours personal knowledge
Museums and art galleries are fabulous place where we preserve ancient things related to our history,culture,tradition and many more.However,nowadays,due to the emergance of internet,people prefer to get knowledge of that antique things through internet,they do not tend to visit at museums or art galleries.On account of this,it is argued that Is internet can fade the importance of museums or not?Here,i probably discard the idea of this statement.
There are multifarious points to support my view.First and foremost,museums play phenomenal role to influence the people internally as we all know observing a thing on the spot have a greater influence rather than read about it.For example unlike read information about a historical thing is much boring than looking it directly.Moreover,a person feel fed up because have to collect knowledge by sitting at one place.Consequently,museums and art galleries are very lucrative.
Further emphasizing my point of view,by visit to a museum we attain enormous amount of information,but,internet offers us only limited knowledge and its is universally accepted that "limited knowledge is always dangerous".Furthermore,we can meet variety of masses in museum and broaden our horizon of knowledge related to a particular thing.
Furthermore,there are numerous other advantages of museums and art galleries and people take benefits from them.To illustrate government offers more attention towards that area where museum is established and provide better amenities to the people of that area because many tourists and foreigners are come to see various prominent historic things.As a result,the lifestyle of that citizens can be improved.
In conclusion,i would like to say that both museum and internet have its own importance,however,internet is not powerful enough in order to replace the importance of museums or art galleries.
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