Old buildings - How important is it to maintain old buildings? Should history stand in the way if progress?
There are thousands of stories behind every single piece of the ancient architectures that is left in the modern world and therefore should be appreciated by every citizen of the country. On account of some reasons, I personally think that old buildings should be protected by legislation and should not be neglected for the purpose of development.
First and foremost, ancient architectures are the centre of attraction among tourists. One of the many reasons or tourists to visit certain countries is because of the old buildings which the country has preserved for example in...
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