Language is an essential exchange tool in our daily life. However, the process of learning is not an easy work. For the purpose of learning it well, some people hold the view that knowledge about a country and local cultures and lifestyles is also indispensable. Personally, I agree this view.
It is a universal acknowledgement that language is the carrier of one nation’s culture. To some extent, it represents a country. Through learning a country’s long history and traditional culture, we can have a broader and cleaner view of the essence involved in a language and therefore improve the whole understand of it.
Furthermore, the process of learning is monotonous, not to mention the language learning. However, if people can spare enough time to learn the local cultures when they are learning a language, they are bound to find interests and be motivated to learn no matter what difficulties they are confronted with. From this perspective, learning culture can spice up learning language.
On the other hand, grammar and vocabulary, the core sectors of a language, will be ignored if we spend more time on cultures of a country. However, if a suitable learning schedule is made, it is reasonable to believe that people will allocate learning time scientifically to guarantee an efficient learning.
Overall, despite it is a challenge for individuals to learn local cultures and lifestyles, the benefits outshine. Meanwhile, people need to arrange time in a reasonable way to ensure other sectors are not influenced.
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Sentence: For the purpose of learning it well, some people hold the view that knowledge about a country and local cultures and lifestyles is also indispensable.
Description: The fragment cultures and lifestyles is not usually followed by is
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace is with are
Sentence: Personally, I agree this view.
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Sentence: It is a universal acknowledgement that language is the carrier of one nation's culture.
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Sentence: To some extent, it represents a country.
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Sentence: Through learning a country's long history and traditional culture, we can have a broader and cleaner view of the essence involved in a language and therefore improve the whole understand of it.
Description: The fragment whole understand of is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace understand with verb, past participle
Sentence: Furthermore, the process of learning is monotonous, not to mention the language learning.
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Sentence: However, if people can spare enough time to learn the local cultures when they are learning a language, they are bound to find interests and be motivated to learn no matter what difficulties they are confronted with.
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Sentence: From this perspective, learning culture can spice up learning language.
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Sentence: On the other hand, grammar and vocabulary, the core sectors of a language, will be ignored if we spend more time on cultures of a country.
No grammatical errors
Sentence: However, if a suitable learning schedule is made, it is reasonable to believe that people will allocate learning time scientifically to guarantee an efficient learning.
No grammatical errors
Sentence: Overall, despite it is a challenge for individuals to learn local cultures and lifestyles, the benefits outshine.
Description: The fragment Overall , is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace Overall with adverb
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I believe after "despite", it
I believe after "despite", it should not follow a sentence.
Hi,catherine-smile,the essay
Hi,catherine-smile,the essay is good with a nice struture and ideas. but please pay attention to small detials on essay writing.
It is a nice essay, just need to remind one thing: "On the other hand" means "However". Be very careful at this point.