People are never satisfied with what they have;they always want something more or something different.use specific reasons and examples.do you agree or disagree.
Success always motivates a person.That's why human are always in a race to get more and more.Whereas,some people want to enjoy and satisfy with what they have.Personally,I think human never get satisfied and always hungry to get more and different.This essay will look at some of for and against of satisfaction of person's need.
There are many factors influencing my views.Firstly,a successful person's expectation from him gets increased.He wants to explore himself more and more.Due to jealously factor also a person wants more fame and status then other.For instance,a number of sport persons ...
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Sentence: There are many factors influencing my views.Firstly,a successful person's expectation from him gets increased.He wants to explore himself more and more.Due to jealously factor also a person wants more fame and status then other.For instance,a number of sport persons besides sport get indulge into advertisement for a acting.As they want to expand themselves into acting field also.Moreover,due to wide range of competition everyone is in a race to prove themselves better and perfect.Besides, as
Description: The fragment to jealously factor is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace jealously with adjective
In the essay you try to discuss both side.It would be better if you just agree 'People are never satisfied with what they have' or disagree 'People are never satisfied with what they have'. like this:
para 1: agree or disagree 'People are never satisfied with what they have'.
para 2: reason 1
para 3: reason 2
para 4: reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 5 15
No. of Words: 291 350
No. of Characters: 1338 1500
No. of Different Words: 165 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.13 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.598 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.441 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 82 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 58 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 37 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 58.2 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 16.606 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 1 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.575 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.897 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.311 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5