people attend colleges or university for different region in your way of thinking. what is the pourpose of people to going university. use specification region and example to support your answer
As we know education plays a lead role to get success. In the 21st century every individual promote to the education for bright future, job opportunity, to get success, new experience, to gain enormous knowledge. Moreover, after completeing high school education every youth has a desire to take admission in colleges or universities for their new experience.
In present scenario, there is a trend in the youth to take admission in colleges or universities. As we can see in the stiff competition every individual participate in related to education field like as- technical education, scientific education, fashion and sports education to brush up knowledge. In my opinion there are several reasons people attend colleges or universities.
Firstly, career option; after completeing the matriculation or 10+2, students have an opportunity to join colleges or universities to study further and enhance knowledge. After complete the Bachleor digree or master digree student have a chance to job opportunity. For example. If a person complete the digree in engineering field or commerce field or arts they have a better chance to got job related to their career.
secondly, New experience; AS we know school is caring life. In the school we can study under the teacher we have a pressure related to study. Apart from this, college life make us learn how to be an independant. It depends upon us how we study in college. We gain a new exprience with different faces. In college life we have open opportunity to enhance the tallent to participate in the field. Thirdly To update knowledege; In colleges or universities we gain the enormous knowledge related to their course. In bachleor digree or master digree we can deeply study to their course matters. We can easily boom up knowledge.
After taking all these aspects into my account. I would like to assret people join the colleges or universities for their only proffesion. College management or universities management take ahead steps. Like percentage related to bachleor courses or entrance test take before admitted colleges. As we can say that everything which has a brighter side also had a dark side.
Sentence: In the 21st century every individual promote to the education for bright future, job opportunity, to get success, new experience, to gain enormous knowledge.
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Sentence: If a person complete the digree in engineering field or commerce field or arts they have a better chance to got job related to their career.
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Sentence: Apart from this, college life make us learn how to be an independant.
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Sentence: Moreover, after completeing high school education every youth has a desire to take admission in colleges or universities for their new experience.
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Sentence: Firstly, career option; after completeing the matriculation or 102, students have an opportunity to join colleges or universities to study further and enhance knowledge.
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Sentence: After complete the Bachleor digree or master digree student have a chance to job opportunity.
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Sentence: If a person complete the digree in engineering field or commerce field or arts they have a better chance to got job related to their career.
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Sentence: Apart from this, college life make us learn how to be an independant.
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Sentence: We gain a new exprience with different faces.
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Sentence: In college life we have open opportunity to enhance the tallent to participate in the field.
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Sentence: Thirdly To update knowledege; In colleges or universities we gain the enormous knowledge related to their course.
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Sentence: In bachleor digree or master digree we can deeply study to their course matters.
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Sentence: I would like to assret people join the colleges or universities for their only proffesion.
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Sentence: Like percentage related to bachleor courses or entrance test take before admitted colleges.
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