People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that some people think that they should manage to save all the money they earn in order to fulfill their need instead of paying tax to the government. While I accept that this can be arguable, I believe that people should pay tax indeed because government also use tax to improve public services and make society’s life more comfortable.

Today, human’s necessities are increasing compare to their need in the past. Such example, if formerly basic necessities of people were including food, clothing, and house, now many people involve education to their basic necessity. Therefore, it can give them higher expenditure.

However, the main purpose of tax payment is to provide the public services for citizens such as improving public transportation. Nowdays, public transportation is one of the most crucial things for human. Most people have many activities and tight schedule, so they have to arrive on their point place as soon as possible. As a result, government will use the tax to improve public transportation so people can easily access it. If people are unwilling to pay tax, they can not get what they want.

Increasing public transportation services can give more benefit for people. It can increase human mobility and help people to earn money. Such an improvement can make multiple effects for the country and of course for people individually. If individual income is raising that means government earning will increase as well.

In conclusion, tax payment will bring benefit for both citizens and the government. Government will use the tax to provide some public services, so that people can gain more benefit of it. Therefore, people have to compromise with the state policy to pay the tax.

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