Nowadays, psychologists discover that the people who have decent social skills can achieve their goals easily since they have confidence to do their duties even if have high risk because thanks to social skills they have different kinds of friends who have different kinds of skills that can help whenever they run into problems which would never happen if these people had not decent social skills.
Moreover, these days not only the parents try to reinforce their children social skills but also the education system make effort to increase these skills among children from early age because they aware of the main skills that are so important during the life for instance when the people who are graduated from university and they try to find appropriate jobs one of the main characteristic that are need to have is social skill.
It is clear that the people who have social skills can get along with their peer easily and make synergy to achieve their goals which are lead to achieving company goals and increasing productivity. These people who have decent social skills can cooperate with each other and reap the benefits of these skills for both of themselves and their societies.
It can be seen that the companies that have appropriate numbers of these persons can count on them as a competition advantage and they can improve their profits by these good human resources that would not be if they were not.
In conclusion, I think it is noticeable that people who have decent social skills are ten times as successful as the other people who have not these skills. Emphasizing on social skills which is something that I absolutely agree with and it is undeniable that the governments try to invest on by broadcasting several education programs about reinforcing these skills via the social media.
Sentence: Nowadays, psychologists discover that the people who have decent social skills can achieve their goals easily since they have confidence to do their duties even if have high risk because thanks to social skills they have different kinds of friends who have different kinds of skills that can help whenever they run into problems which would never happen if these people had not decent social skills.
Description: A conjunction, subordinating is not usually followed by a verb 'to have', uninflected present tense, infinitive or
Suggestion: Refer to if and have
Sentence: Moreover, these days not only the parents try to reinforce their children social skills but also the education system make effort to increase these skills among children from early age because they aware of the main skills that are so important during the life for instance when the people who are graduated from university and they try to find appropriate jobs one of the main characteristic that are need to have is social skill.
Description: The fragment system make effort is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace make with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Sentence: Emphasizing on social skills which is something that I absolutely agree with and it is undeniable that the governments try to invest on by broadcasting several education programs about reinforcing these skills via the social media.
Description: The fragment social skills which is not usually followed by is
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace is with are
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 57 80
Avg. Sentence Length: 43.571 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 17.467 7.5
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Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Words: 305 350
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No. of Different Words: 146 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.179 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.875 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.432 2.4
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