the percentage of money a child spent last weekend on different things
The pie chart illustrates how a child spends his pocket money at the weekend. Based on the chart the child spends his money in four different ways. On dinner, buying shirts, on cinema and for buying ice-cream.
Main parts of the chart show us that around 40 percent of usage is due to eating dinner. About 30 percent o f the money is spent for purchasing shirts and after that at the third place he has spent his money on buying cinema ticket that contains 20 percent as the whole. At the end, a tenth of money is spent on ice-cream that includes 10 percent.
According to this diagram we could figure out that the child tends to spend his money on dinner and eating at the restaurant and a quarter of this amount is spent on ice-cream. And also his is fond of shopping by allocating about third of his money for purchasing shirts.
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