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At present, science has been developing at a high speed, but people still have a high opinion of artists. What can the arts tell us of the life that science cannot?


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At present, science has been developing at a high speed, but people still have a high opinion of artists. What can the arts tell us of the life that science cannot?

To know about why people still prefer to think art is crucial than science, I will explain and compare both of them in these paragraphs.

At the past, people cannot obtain technology because of the limitation from critical thinking for scientist. They did not notice about how to send information faster and move to another place quickly. But nowadays, people can feel enjoyable with the output of science. Modern technology such as public transportation, gadget, and social media are the trully evidences of science that are growing faster. However, people conclude that arts have a complex perception than science. Even science has an important thing for life, but arts have done to release and create history for people today that science cannot give. According to Encyclopedia of Britanica, myriad art buildings from the past are unexplained until now about the process to create. The Great Pyramid of Giza, the most amazing building from Egypt, is one of unexpected building that scientist cannot decribe how to compose it. Then, Stonehenge which is large standing stone and prehistoric monument in England from 3000 BC can survive until now. Most people today cannot imagine the chronology why great buildings like Pyramid and Stonehenge monument can exist without high technology. Therefore, all of tremendous arts from the past still have high expectation from people because of scientist cannot imitate it. They believe that the historical of artistic things in the past tell about unpredictable life that they should appreciate and protect it.

Furthermore, I believe arts are part of science. Much expedition of researchers find rare stuffs learn from the past to add new knowledge for improvement people nowadays. It helps human to receive and share each other.

To conclude, people believe that arts have crucial story of life than science. Even, science has improvement for human life today.

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Sentence: To know about why people still prefer to think art is crucial than science, I will explain and compare both of them in these paragraph.
Description: The fragment in these paragraph is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: in these paragraphs

Sentence: Modern technology such public transportation, gadget, and social media are the trully evidences of science that are growing faster.
Suggestion: Modern technologies such as public...

Sentence: The Great Pyramid of Giza, the most amazing build from Egypt, is one of unexpected building that scienctist cannot decribe how to compose it.
Description: The word build is not usually used as a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to build

Sentence: The Great Pyramid of Giza, the most amazing build from Egypt, is one of unexpected building that scienctist cannot decribe how to compose it.
Error: decribe Suggestion: describe
Error: scienctist Suggestion: scientist

Sentence: Therefore, all of tremendous arts from the past still have high expectation from people because of scienctist cannot imitate it.
Error: scienctist Suggestion: scientist

Sentence: Much expedition of researchers find rare stuffs particularize from the past to add new knowlegde for improvement people nowadays.
Error: particularize Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: knowlegde Suggestion: knowledge

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Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 304 350
No. of Characters: 1568 1500
No. of Different Words: 168 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.176 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.158 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.583 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 87 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 49 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 38 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.889 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.486 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.389 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.338 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.483 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.067 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5

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