Present a written argument or case to and educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic: The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.
Nowadays, human needs increase day by day because there is a changing of paradigm about “wants” to be “need”. It could be hard to fulfill the needs with only one career, so single career is claimed as old fashion. People tend to be have more than one career to get much money to pay the bills what they need. This essay would argue that people in facing dynamic life would be better to have several careers and must be supported by higher education.
People with single career are assumed that they are already comfort with their position now. They do not have to do other jobs because they satisfy with their income now. In addition, they could be afraid to do other jobs those are not their field, so they just do the same things through their life. To fulfill their needs, they just depend on one source income that could become danger if their only source is interferred.
However, by the developing world life, several careers are really needed to fulfill the enormous needs of human. People would work hard to earn money and they tend to have side jobs in their career. This statement could be strengthened with the condition of economy today. The price of goods increase because the lack of supply from producent. As a result, people could not depend on only one source income but they have to be more creative to get more money. For example, a man working as accountant in the office have to do side jobs like small business that he could do in the weekend to cover his needs.
Furthermore, to have several careers, it should be supported by higher education because education is one base to make better life. By education, people could get much advantage in their life because school or university not only teach about academic ability but also soft skills those really needed in future life. For instance, today the number of women work in management position rises because they have higher education.
To sum up, people are better to have several careers because of the growth of human needs. Education has important role to support people facing the dynamic life today.
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Sentence: People with single career are assumed that they are already comfort with their position now.
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not only teach about academic ability but also soft skills
teach not only about academic ability but also soft skills
Sentence: The price of goods increase because the lack of supply from producent.
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