Reading is more important for developing imagination and language skills than television. Do you agree or dissgree?

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Reading is more important for developing imagination and language skills than television. Do you agree or dissgree?

Nowadays, imagination and language skills are very essential in these global era. Several new method has been discovered to support people in order to have these skills more quick and efficient. There are several research has been done regarding this statement, and i believes reading is the best method for developing imagination and language skills than television.

To begin with, imagination are playing an important role to develop civilization; and reading are the best method to gain more skills on human imagination. When reading a book without picture on it, human automatically will imagine all possible picture that could happen. Variation of imagination on each person is very different and very varied. For example: when parents read a bed time story for their children, the children will imagine something very amazingly. Book without picture will trigger unlimited imagination. Not only children have amazing imagination, but also an adults person has unlimited imagination. This is very different if they just stick on television; the person only accept what did they saw, there are no complex thinking process; just focusing on story will not gain any improvement on imagination.

Furthermore, reading also developing language skills, when reading a book; people facing new kind of word an phrase. The language structure and difficult vocabulary will be an advantage to improve their languages skills. this will be different if stick watching television. Television will not give many time for people to process the language skills; focusing on language will lost focus on story. The television will give an option for people to choose enjoying the shows or learn the language. Despite this is very different if they reading a book. Book will entertain with variation of language style and also impressive story.

In conclusion, despite television more entertaining than reading a book. the sense of language improvement and unlimited imagination will be developed by reading, because reading are the best step to earn many new skills.

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several new method has been discovered
several new methods have been discovered

There are several research has been done
There are several researches which have been done

Not only children have amazing imagination, but also an adults person has unlimited imagination.
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focusing on language will lost focus on story.
focusing on language will lose focus on story.

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No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2

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Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.941 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.627 7.5
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Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.114 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5