As a result of electronic inventions such as the computer and television people do less physical activity and this is having a negative effect on their health To what extent do you agree or disagree

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As a result of electronic inventions such as the computer and television, people do less physical activity, and this is having a negative effect on their health.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Computer and television are the example of electronic products which make people lazy to do some exercises, so it causes problems on citizen’s health. However, it depends on the behavior of each person because different person has distinctive daily activities.

In some places, computer and television are the main devices which entertain people doing their daily lives. For example, the using of them in the office causes some problems in people’s health. When workers watch television too much, it can cause several problems on their eyes and influence their work. Also, the operating of computer for work causes a big problem on their vision. Most of workers spend their time on the chair which causes lots of negative effects for their physical health.

On the other hand, the newer technologies have more advantages for people’s health. For example, the newest computer and television have new features which are safe for the people’s health. As a result, technology is not the only reason that people do less physical activities. There are other tools which cause some physical problems of human. And even, new inventions have used in most of the hospitals around the world, which help the doctors detect the problem of their patients.

In my view, the inhabitants, as the users of technology, have knowledge to manage and to choose the friendly technology only. This will cause many benefits for people’s lives in the future.

In a nutshell, every technology has distinctive effects for human. Inhabitants as the user of technology should filter and control their daily activities. As a result, there will more positive effects than the negative impacts in the future.

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