As a result of electronic inventions such as the computer and television, people do less physical activity, and this is having a negative effect on their health.
To what extent do you agree or disagree
Several new electronic inventions in 20th century were computer and television. In the past, people have more activities and didn’t get their activities with high technologies. Nowadays, inhabitants are very familiar with the technologies. In the developing countries, each other to compete and create new inventions which have negative and positive effect in the future.
Computer and television are used almost everybody in the world. It is hard to imagine what things would be like today without them. Everyone is using computers for business and pleasure. Computers are very helpful ...
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Sentence: Computers are very helpful some people to do their jobs.
Description: An adjective is not usually followed by a determiner/pronoun, singular or plural
Suggestion: Refer to helpful and some
Sentence: Television is one of the entertain everyone who necessary for relax, laugh, and find news.
Description: A WH-pronoun, nominative is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to who and necessary
Sentence: It is make inhabitants do less physical activity and also make a tremendous impact on our lives.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to is and make
Sentence: Also, It's make bad our healthy.
Description: An adjective is not usually followed by a determiner, possessive
Suggestion: Refer to bad and our
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