Scientists and the news media are presenting ever more evidence of climate change. Governments cannot be expected to solve this problem. It is the responsibility of individuals to change their lifestyle to prevent further damage.What are your views?

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Scientists and the news media are presenting ever more evidence of climate change. Governments cannot be expected to solve this problem. It is the responsibility of individuals to change their lifestyle to prevent further damage.
What are your views?

Having good climate in a country, as we all know and no one can really deny, not only is a matter of great importance in a country but also plays a significant roll in every individual’s health. Recently scientists are bringing more and more documents, which reveal the climate change. People are main responsible for this problem and government cannot stop and prevent without human’s contribution. Scholars are of the point of view that the factories, old cars and cutting trees are main causes of global warming.

At first glance I would talk about harms of using old cars on climate, such as polluting air, which leads to lots of illnesses like soar throat and breathing problems especially for children. People should reduce using their own cars and try to travel by public transportation.

Second proofed reason is factories near cities. There are a lot of factories around the city, which their activities create fumes and it is because of their usage of fossil fuels. There are some solutions to decrease the pollution due to these fuels one of them is the use of solar energy, which in many countries is superseded.

The third is cutting off trees and destroying forest that is a very great natural filter for carbon dioxide. These trees kindly diminish available pollution in the air with respiration and the most convenient way is to preserve them.

All in all after all these issues, I personally believe that government should warn people via mass media and persuade them to change their old cars. And the other responsibility of government is to expand public transportation and try to improve it. In the other hand every individual should not underestimate it and be aware of it is for their own benefit to observe.

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