Should developing countries concentrate on improving industrial base or should they promote education first?
In the recent times there is a great improvement in the field of science and technology. So the developing country has improved a lot in many of the fields. But there always been a debate, to improve industrial base or promote education first. As Industries have managed to develop it's new base. so we should focus much more on the education first. As education is the first sign of the developed country.
Firstly, education should be given a major priority in the developing countries. In fact education has became the basic needs and requirement that person should have. Suppose if our country ...
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