Some business now say that no one can smoke cigarettes in any of their offices. Some governments have banned smoking in all public places. To what extent do you support? give your reason.

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Some business now say that no one can smoke cigarettes in any of their offices. Some governments have banned smoking in all public places. To what extent do you support? give your reason.

Prohibited smoking in all public area is the best idea to create people life healthier, and this could decrease a number of deaths in this world. However, myriad of people disagree with that statement due to human rights in this world.

Nowadays, president of Indonesia announces to all of societies that they could not smoke in state district. When they break that rule, they have to pay fine approximately one million to the council. Few of citizens refuse it because they have authority in this country, and this action does not include criminality. If governments are to run this regulation, they have to provide several places where they could smoke. Mostly, inhabitants could not stop smoking tend to addict, and governments might not force them in brief time due to adaption with that commandment.

On the other hand, numerous folks support council’s idea because the people who are smoking would give up if they obtain that punishment. Incalculably people suffer dangerous illness because they would be passive smoker. They are the person who inhales the smoke, and it is very hazardous for human bodies healthy. They frequently acquire harder diseases than active smoker, such as lung cancer, asthma and heart attack. Because of that, amount of deaths in this country increase lead to smoke. People who smoke would disturb the others around them. This could be government’s responsibility to maintain level of number nations live in this country. For this reason, they set up the strict rule for nations in order to stash it. Besides, smoking is very harmful in industry territory. Labor could not fumes inside factory due to this place consist of materials which easily to burn. In fact, there are 10 issues about burning of factories caused by smoke. As a result, Businesses banned smoking to the worker in factory area during work.

Consequently, government’s regulation about stop smoking is quiet important to organize a level of population's number. Moreover, owner of companies implement this rule for saving their property in their area.

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Sentence: Mostly, inhabitants could not stop smoking tend to addict, and governments might not force their in brief time due to adaption with that commandment.
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