In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

It is commonly understood today, that obesity is becoming one of the main problems. This is nowhere more evident, that in several countries the average weight of people is growing and their health and fitness levels are decreasing. There are many different causes of these problems.

One of the causes of obesity is fast food. It is obvious that, people prefer eating fast food due to the cheapness of the price. Also, today people are busier and they have not got much time for preparing the meal at home. So, they consider to think that, fast food is the best solution for them as it saves the time. Furthermore, people spend their time at work sitting on one place in front of the computer. These facts lead to serious health problem such as eye disease. Moreover, people do not burn their calories as they do not move and do different kinds of exercises.

Besides these, people are becoming lazier day by day. They act like this due to the improvement of technology. As you know, nowadays, there are many various technological devices that make people’s life easier. As a result, they do not have a desire to do something on their own.

To recapitulate, despite the fact that people’s weight are increasing, government should take any measures to solve this problem. In my own opinion, I think government should provide special fitness centers in every workplace and make different advertisements to make people do exercises. Consequently, the level of health and fitness of people will increase.

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