In some countries old age is highly valued, while in others youth is emphasized. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

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In some countries old age is highly valued, while in others youth is emphasized. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

It is widely believed that in western society elderly people are less valued then in eastern society. In my observation such notion lacks the understanding of the western societies. Proponents of this argument tend to justify their claim citing differences in individualistic and collectivistic nature of the two societies. I find such claims are unwarranted. Like in many eastern countries, elderly are well respected by society in western countries. Business and political history of western society are replete with examples, wherein; elderly members played a pivotal role in the development ...

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Sentence: Proponents of this argument tend to justify their claim citing differences in individualistic and collectivistic nature of the two societies.
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