In some large cities, people have to pay a fee when they drive their cars into the city centre in a policy to reduce the number of cars in the city. Give reasons in support and opposing this policy, and give your own opinion.
These days, there is a vexed issue that people who,drive cars in the downtown, have to pay extra cost to cross the street around it because this cost is a policy to alleviate several problems that have been recently occurred. Exponents of this idea deliberate the extra payment as a key answer to severe traffic congestion and air pollution issue. However, the protesters consider this idea rather than dubious and disadvantageous. Apropos to this side, a road fee bring merely an exclusivity to prosperous citizens.
To them who say agree, creating a payment system at some crowded avenues could s...
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Sentence: Exponents of this idea deliberate the extra payment as a key answer to severe traffic congestion and air pollution issue.
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Suggestion: Refer to deliberate and the
people have changing the way of their mobility to this road without driving their personal vehicles which induced gridlock and unhealthy air quality jeopardize its existence.
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Sentence: To them who say agree, creating a payment system at some crowded avenues could significantly reduce traffic jam as a predominant problem and shraply decrease air pollution as a side effect of it.
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