Some people believe that advertisements are useful for viewers, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, we can found advertisement in every place and every time. For example, when we see our favorite program on TV or when we pass the street, we can see advertisements. Some people believe, these advertisements are not good for viewer, however others do not agree.
We live in a competitive world. Every company tries to find new market and wins in marketing. Therefore, advertisement is a powerful tool for them to gain more customers. Besides, everyday all factories around the world produce new products and advertising is an only way to introduce their goods. In addition, people have not enough time or knowledge to try all product or find best product. Moreover, advertising industry causes a lot of jobs opportunity for people.
On the other hand, we cannot deny damage effect of advertisements on our live. First of all, unfortunately, advertisement encourages people to buy unnecessary goods. This matter is harmful for family’s budget. Secondly, we cannot trust everything that show in an advertisement is true. In most of the case, an advertisement is full of lie.
Unfortunately, these kind of advertisements are very harmful for young generation. Finally, advertisements are annoying when we see our favorite TV series or when we watch a play of favorite football team.
To sum up, upon the all disadvantages, I think advertising is good for our current life. We can watch and an advertisement and thinking about that weather is good and comfortable for us or not. Even if found a product useful, we can introduce it to other people.
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Nowadays, we can found
Nowadays, we can found advertisement in every place and every time. We are constantly surrounded by advertising, from television commercials, radio or billboards to posters on the roads. Some people believe, these advertisements are not good for viewer, however others do not agree.
Firstly, advertising plays an important role in the economy. Companies need to tell consumers about their products and services. Advertising informs us about the choices we have and the use of the products. Secondly, advertising is a creative industry that employs many people, therefore providing jobs opportunities and income for people. So, without advertising, there would be higher unemployment rate.
For example, Kellogg’s cornflakes have a variety of flavours for different ranges to offer for different age groups and now also for people want to lose weight, thus giving consumers different choice to select from. As a result, without advertising, we would have fewer choices.
On the other hand, it is understandable why some people might think that advertising is a negative part of our lives. One problem is that advertisers often aim their marketing at the young age groups. Children, for instance, can easily be influenced by advertisements. So this put pressure on their parents to buy them things by pestering and nagging. Another problem is that many advertisements manipulate people too badly. Capturing the minds of consumers is the main intention of the advertisements. Thus by persuading people that buying a product will make them happier and with higher social status.
In conclusion, the advantage of television advertising makes it by far the most effective advertising medium. Since the marketing industry is very competitive, even the smallest advantage can give a company an edge over its competitors. Thus, companies with a large advertising budget undoubtedly prefer television to other forms of advertising media.
we can found advertisement in every place and every time.
we can find advertisements in every place and every time.
a lot of jobs opportunity for people.
a lot of job opportunities for people.
upon the all disadvantages,
upon all disadvantages,
Even if found a product useful, we can introduce it to other people.
If a product is found useful, we can introduce it to other people.
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