some people prefer to spend their live doing the same things and avoiding chance others however,think that change is always a good thing.

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some people prefer to spend their live doing the same things and avoiding chance others however,think that change is always a good thing.

Nowadays, the world is based on technology.technology developed enormously and technical machines dominate over the expert people and those machines replaced their jobs. Having a one skill comes in old generation but today world has totally changed and performing the multitasks at one time.

Actually, computer diverted the mind of people and way of their living too. it is content and find everywhere that usually youth try to perform themselves like computer that would perform multitasks under one time.Moreover having the multi skills would have colossal chance of achieving success while others refraining to do such new activities would have detrimental effects on future.

In contrast, people who believed that trying such new activities would have excessive risks of life. in consequence, they would loss their command from their previous activities. Furthermore,they make their massive efforts at only one particular field to achieve the success.However,they realized that every field has its own value and opportunity for jobs.

As my consideration and opinions said that reliable yourself like computer had excessive chance of achievement rather than making expert in specified field.In others words high Authorized Organizations only prefer the jobs for those who were trying new things and has had an experience in various fields. Avoiding to do new things is worse curse rather than trying it once only because it is great saying that"try and try till try untill you are not succeed in goal." consequently trying once only may change their whole with bright future.

To close the chapter, it s not easy to answer this question however i tend to believe that it is better to upgrade skills and efforts as possible as you can.

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Sentence: Moreover having the multi skills would have colossal chance of achieving success while others refraining to do such new activities would have detrimental effects on future.
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Sentence: Avoiding to do new things is worse curse rather than trying it once only because it is great saying that'try and try till try untill you are not succeed in goal.' consequently trying once only may change their whole with bright future.
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Sentence: In others words high Authorized Organizations only prefer the jobs for those who were trying new things and has had an experience in various fields.
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Sentence: Avoiding to do new things is worse curse rather than trying it once only because it is great saying that'try and try till try untill you are not succeed in goal.' consequently trying once only may change their whole with bright future.
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